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The Taste of Commitment

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Odette, a gamine, coquettish French woman working in London has known Paul has a crush on her for some time. Paul is a handsome and gentlemanly Englisman, but very reserved and unsure of his own appeal. They flirt but Paul is never sure enough to make his move. So Odette decides to give him the opportunity to start a physical relationship by making him her personal pussy licker. Paul is delighted by this and tells Odette that there are no circumstances where he wouldn’t be delighted to eat her out…so Odette decides to test his claim.

Characters

  • Waitress — A young French waitress in her mid-twenties with dark hair in a bun and sharp eyes. She saw a video of Paul and wants him to go down on her.
  • Suzette — Suzette is a blonde haired woman in her late twenties. Her blonde hair is cut into a severe bob. Her whole manner and demeanour is that of a very strict school teacher, unsmiling, professional, she has a job to do and high standards which she expects to be met. Suzette is one of Clarissa’s harem of
  • Tim — Tim is one of Clarissa’s harem of staff. He helps arrange sex parties for Clarissa and helps Suzette deal with the sex slaves, he is quite soft and kind in his manner.
  • Amber — A woman with auburn hair and enormous, perfect breasts, bound and gagged in the room where Paul is placed.
  • Milly — A woman who was subjected to the trestle and ginger at Clarissa's party. She cried in the bathroom afterward but returned. She is married and will return home on Sunday with marks still on her. She has been trained so that she can only cum while being whipped, even though she hates and fears the whi

Chapter 55: It’s always the quiet ones

The room held its breath for a second, suspended in the casual obscenity of Eleanor’s request. The teacup’s soft clink seemed to echo. Martha, flushed and sticky, slid off Paul’s torso with a fluid, unselfconscious grace. She didn’t look at him again. Her focus was already turning inward, to the new power thrumming in her veins.

“Right,” Martha said, her voice remarkably steady. She swung her legs off the bed and stood, completely naked, in the middle of the elegant room. She looked at her mother, then at the used, prone figure of Paul. A small, private smile touched her lips. “He’s good at that.”

“I expect nothing less from Odette’s special project,” Eleanor replied cheerfully. “Now, hop to it, darling. You’ll miss your bus.”

Martha dressed with an efficient lack of modesty, pulling her jeans over her damp thighs, shrugging into her jumper. She gathered her small bag, gave her mother a peck on the cheek, and left without a backward glance at Paul. The bedroom door clicked shut behind her, leaving a profound, charged silence.

Eleanor took a slow sip of her tea, her eyes—a pale, intelligent blue—appraising Paul over the rim of the cup. She placed it back on the saucer with a precise tink.

She placed it back on the saucer with a precise tink.

“Lovely tea,” she said, crossing her legs. The silk robe fell open, revealing pale, slender thighs. The faint, musky scent of Martha’s departure still lingered in the air between them. “You look thoroughly done in, Paul. She can be quite a handful, my girl.”

Paul pushed himself up on his elbows, the velvet bedspend clinging to his damp back. He felt hollowed out, used. “She was… assertive.”

“Good,” Eleanor said, a bright, pleasant smile on her face as if discussing a successful tennis match. “That’s the point, isn’t it? Use men, don’t let them use you. She’s learning.” She picked a stray thread from her robe. “You didn’t give her any trouble, I trust?”

“No,” Paul said, his voice rough. He saw no point in elaboration. The evidence was smeared on his chin, soaking into the sheets.

“Jolly good.” Eleanor leaned forward, pouring more tea from the pot into his untouched cup. The gesture was domestic, unnerving. “Sugar? Milk?”

“Black is fine,” he murmured, taking the proffered cup. The warmth was a shock against his skin. He sipped, the bland, civilized taste a surreal contrast to the coppery tang still on his tongue.

They drank in silence for a moment, the fire crackling. It was a scene from a polite drawing-room comedy, except he was naked and scent-marked by her daughter.

“Odette speaks very highly of your… compliance,” Eleanor said finally, setting her cup down. “Says you’re the most thorough pussy-licker she’s ever had. Quite the accolade.”

Paul said nothing. He just stared into his tea.

“It’s given me an idea, you see,” she continued, her tone light, conversational. “A little fantasy I’ve harboured. I didn’t think I’d find a man suitable for it, but you… you’re practically bred for it.”

He looked up then, meeting her pale blue gaze. “What fantasy?”

Eleanor’s smile widened, but it didn’t touch her eyes. They were cool, analytical. “It’s about insemination. The male act of planting seed. Men seem to think it’s a claiming, don’t they? A victory. They pump their spunk into a woman and feel they’ve marked territory, inflicted their essence.” She waved a dismissive hand. “Do you know what I mean?”

Paul remained silent, waiting.

“But do you know the film Alien?” she said, her voice dropping to a confiding pitch. “The creature. The lifecycle. It implants its embryo into a host. The host is merely a vessel, a walking incubator for the queen’s young. It doesn’t matter if the host is male or female. The seed is forced in, and it grows.” She leaned closer, her eyes gleaming in the lamplight. “I find that inversion profoundly erotic. The woman as the impregnator. The queen.”

A cold, curious thrill traced Paul’s spine. He understood subjugation, but this was a new geometry.

“My fetish,” Eleanor stated, “is to be that queen. To implant my eggs into a host.” She reached for the small bowl of green grapes on the bedside table. She plucked one, rolling its cool, smooth surface between her thumb and forefinger. “These will be my eggs. I’m going to insert as many as I can fit inside me.”

Paul’s breath caught.

“Then,” she continued, standing and letting her silk robe fall open completely, “I will fasten my cloaca over your mouth and nose. And I will expel them. I will birth my eggs into you, and I want you to swallow every one.”

The raw, graphic image slammed into his mind. His stomach clenched. It was absurd, degrading, and bizarrely compelling.

“You want me to… eat grapes from your vagina?”

“Don’t spoil it! No, I want you to be my host,” she corrected, her pleasant veneer sharpening into something razor-like. “You will receive my brood. You will bear the essence I inflict on you.” She tilted her head. “Given your recent activities, I can’t imagine you’d balk at the deed. But if you could manage to seem… distressed? As if you’re being violated by the process, forced to bear my young. Struggling weakly. It would be so much better.”

Paul looked from her keen, excited face to the bowl of grapes. The grotesque theatre of it was perfect. It was the logical, twisted extension of everything he had become. A tool for female pleasure, an object for their symbolism. He nodded slowly, the submission settling into his bones like a familiar chill. “I understand.”

“Splendid,” Eleanor breathed, her cheery demeanor returning full force. “Now, be a darling and lie back.”

She picked up the bowl and settled herself at the foot of the bed, her back to him. She hitched her robe up around her waist, exposing her narrow backside and the pale, neat split of her sex. She was slim, her skin like parchment stretched over fine bones. She plucked a grape from the bowl.

Paul watched, his cock stirring traitorously against his stomach as she reached behind herself. Her fingers parted her labia, already glistening with a thin sheen of arousal. She inserted the first grape slowly, pushing it past her tight entrance with a soft, focused sigh. Her body accepted it with a slight, intimate clench.

“One,” she murmured, almost to herself. She took another. The process was methodical, obscenely clinical. She worked them into herself, one by one, her breathing becoming slightly more labored as she filled. The green orbs disappeared inside her, stretching her modest opening, creating a slight, round bulge.

“Goodness, they’re quite cool,” she said with a light laugh, as if commenting on the weather. She pushed in a seventh, then an eighth. Her thighs trembled slightly with the effort. She was packing herself impossibly full. “I think that’s my limit. I can feel them… stacked, right up in the corners of me. Quite the clutch.”

She turned then, shifting on the bed to face him. She knelt before him, her legs spread. The mound of her pubis looked slightly distended, a firm, round curve beneath her pale skin. A sheen of clear juice—hers, or the grape’s—glistened at her entrance.

“Now,” she said, her voice losing its pleasantry, becoming taut with command. “On your back. Head off the side of the bed. I need the right angle.”

Paul obeyed, shuffling down until his head hung back over the edge of the mattress. The world inverted. He saw the fireplace mantel upside down, the patterned ceiling. Then her form blotted out the light as she moved over him, straddling his face.

Her scent, clean and subtly floral, filled his inverted senses. Then he felt the hot, shocking press of her vulva against his mouth. She wasn’t gentle. She lowered her weight, sealing his mouth and nose in the warm, damp vice of her thighs and sex. The world narrowed to the smell of her, the taste of her skin, the firm, grape-laden bulge of her vagina hovering just above his lips.

“Open,” she commanded, her voice muffled.

He opened his mouth, gasping for air through the constricted space. The moment his lips parted, she bore down.

It was not a gentle push. It was a forceful, muscular contraction. A hard, wet, round object was expelled from her channel directly into his open mouth. It hit his tongue with a soft, cool thud, tainted with a smear of her fluids.

“Swallow it,” she grunted, her body clenching again.

Paul gagged reflexively, the grape huge and awkward in his mouth. Her juices coated it, his tongue, his throat. He managed to work it back, to choke it down. It was an effort, humiliating and visceral.

“Good host,” she panted, and pushed again.

Another grape, slick and cold, shot into his mouth. This time, he pretended to choke, a clumsy, distressed sound bubbling up from his throat. He let his hands flail weakly, slapping against the bed frame.

“Yes!” Eleanor hissed, her voice trembling with excitement. “Fight it! The parasite is invading!”

She bore down again, harder. A third grape, then a fourth in quick succession. They pummeled the back of his throat, making him gag in earnest. Tears sprang to his eyes from the strain and the absurdity. He swallowed convulsively, the sweet-bitter burst of grape skin and her thick, musky taste flooding his senses.

She was moaning now, her clinical control shattering. The act of expulsion, of forced implantation, was driving her toward climax. Her hips ground against his face, fucking his mouth with the force of her contractions. “Take my eggs… you fucking… vessel!”

Another grape. Then another. His stomach churned, overfull. He feigned a weak, sobbing resistance, his body convulsing as she pumped her “brood” into him. It was a contestant for the most degrading thing he had ever done. A profound, dizzying surrender.

With a final, guttural cry, Eleanor shoved the last grape into him and clamped down, her orgasm ripping through her lean frame. Her sex pulsed rhythmically against his lips, releasing a final trickle of warm release. She held there, trembling, gasping for air, as he swallowed the last of her grotesque, symbolic offspring.

Slowly, she lifted herself off him. He collapsed back onto the bed, coughing, his belly full of fruit and shame.

She looked down at him, her face flushed, her eyes blazing with a dark, satisfied light. She wiped a hand across her glistening sex, then brought her fingers to her mouth, sucking them clean with a contented sigh.

“Perfect,” she breathed, her cheerful demeanour returning like a mask snapping back into place. “Absolutely perfect. Odette was right about you.” She picked up her teacup, took a sip, and smiled. “You really are so much fun.”

She glanced at the clock. If they left now they’d just be in time for work. Paul had no time to wash properly so threw on his suit over the smells and tastes of Martha and Eleanor. He’d carry them with him to work.

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