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The Taste of Commitment

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Odette, a gamine, coquettish French woman working in London has known Paul has a crush on her for some time. Paul is a handsome and gentlemanly Englisman, but very reserved and unsure of his own appeal. They flirt but Paul is never sure enough to make his move. So Odette decides to give him the opportunity to start a physical relationship by making him her personal pussy licker. Paul is delighted by this and tells Odette that there are no circumstances where he wouldn’t be delighted to eat her out…so Odette decides to test his claim.

Characters

  • Waitress — A young French waitress in her mid-twenties with dark hair in a bun and sharp eyes. She saw a video of Paul and wants him to go down on her.
  • Suzette — Suzette is a blonde haired woman in her late twenties. Her blonde hair is cut into a severe bob. Her whole manner and demeanour is that of a very strict school teacher, unsmiling, professional, she has a job to do and high standards which she expects to be met. Suzette is one of Clarissa’s harem of
  • Tim — Tim is one of Clarissa’s harem of staff. He helps arrange sex parties for Clarissa and helps Suzette deal with the sex slaves, he is quite soft and kind in his manner.
  • Amber — A woman with auburn hair and enormous, perfect breasts, bound and gagged in the room where Paul is placed.
  • Milly — A woman who was subjected to the trestle and ginger at Clarissa's party. She cried in the bathroom afterward but returned. She is married and will return home on Sunday with marks still on her. She has been trained so that she can only cum while being whipped, even though she hates and fears the whi

Chapter 5: Stronger flavours

The buzz of Paul’s phone on his oak desk was a jolt in the hushed reverence of his chambers. Sunlight streamed through tall windows, illuminating dust motes dancing above stacks of case files. He’d been dissecting a particularly thorny contractual clause, the dry legalese a flimsy dam against the tide of memories from yesterday – the taste of desperation and dirt still a phantom sensation on his tongue. He glanced at the screen. Odette. His pulse hammered instantly against his starched collar.

The message contained no text. Just an image. He thumbed it open, the movement furtive, glancing towards his closed door.

It was a close-up, startlingly intimate. The soft, dark curls he knew, slightly parted to reveal pink, glistening folds, slick with arousal. The lighting was dim, intimate, highlighting the plump swell of her labia, the dewy sheen at her entrance. It was obscene. It was a revelation. It was a direct line to the animal part of his brain, bypassing the barrister entirely. His cock surged against his trousers, a painful, immediate response. He stared, memorizing the texture, the way the light caught the moisture, the faint, imagined scent conjured by the image alone. A rare treasure indeed. He saved it, fingers trembling slightly, then locked his phone screen, forcing his gaze back to the contract. The words blurred. All he saw was pink silk and damp shadow.

She gave him an hour or two to think about her picture before knocking on his door. Before he could fully rise, Odette stood in the open dooorway, a file in hand, radiating cool efficiency in a sharp navy suit, her dark pixie cut flawless. She looked like she’d stepped off the cover of The Lawyer.

"Paul," she said, her voice crisp. "Just dropping off the amended Henderson brief. Need your eyes on clause 4.3 before lunch." She placed the file precisely on the corner of his desk, not meeting his eyes directly, but her gaze flickered down for a split second. To his lap.

She walked around his desk, leaning her hip casually against it, facing him. Her perfume, something expensive and subtly floral, warred with the phantom scent from the photo. "It's a mess, that clause," she murmured, looking not at the file, but at the window behind him. "Completely ambiguous."

He tried to formulate a response, anything, but his throat felt tight. Her proximity was electric. She shifted her weight slightly, her skirt riding up a fraction on her thigh. Then, with a casualness that stole his breath, she hooked one foot out of her stiletto. The bare sole of her stockinged foot brushed lightly against the inside of his calf, just above his ankle. He froze.

Her expression remained impassive, professional, as if discussing tort reform. "We really need to pin down the liability cap," she continued, her foot sliding slowly upwards, tracing the line of his shin beneath his trousers. The friction was maddening through the fine wool. Her eyes finally met his, a flicker of amusement in the green depths. She held his gaze as her foot continued its ascent, reaching his knee, then pushing higher, the pressure increasing, rubbing deliberately against the straining bulge in his trousers.

He gasped, a strangled sound. "Odette..."

"Shhh," she breathed, barely audible. Her eyes didn't waver. Her foot pressed firmly, grinding the heel against the thick ridge of his cock. She began a slow, rhythmic rocking motion of her hips, subtle but unmistakable. Her free hand drifted down, disappearing beneath the hem of her skirt. He could see the slight tension in her arm, the minute movements. She was touching herself. Right there. In his office.

His own hand twitched on the desk, desperate to unzip, to touch himself, to match her rhythm. He was painfully hard, throbbing under the relentless pressure of her foot. He could smell her arousal now, subtle but distinct beneath the perfume, mingling with the scent of leather and paper. "Let me... please... let me taste you," he choked out, the words raw.

A small, cruel smile touched her lips. Her eyes were hooded, watching his reaction as she continued to rock her hips, her fingers undoubtedly working her own wetness beneath her skirt. "This isn't for you, Paul," she murmured, her voice a low thrum that vibrated through his bones. "This is just... preparing a marinade." She increased the pressure of her foot, grinding harder. She seemed to match the increased pressure of her foot with that of her fingers and Paul was astonished to see Odette beginning to lose herself right there in his office. Her eyes began to close, her head tilted back and her breathing became ragged. Suddenly she gasped, held her breath and fixed him with an intense stare. He knew her sounds, her tensions, he knew she was about to cum.

Then, abruptly, she stopped.

She pulled her foot back, slipping it smoothly back into her shoe. Her hand emerged from under her skirt. She smoothed her skirt down, her breathing only slightly elevated. She looked utterly composed. "So, clause 4.3. Thoughts by lunch?" she asked, her tone back to brisk professionalism, as if the last sixty seconds hadn't happened. As if she wasn't trembling on the precipice mere seconds before.

He could only stare, "I... yes. Lunch," he managed, his voice thick.

"Excellent." She turned and walked out, the click of her heels on the polished floor echoing the frantic pounding of his heart. He slumped back in his chair, shaking. He hadn't even touched the file.

The afternoon crawled. The Henderson brief was a blur. Every time he tried to focus, the memory of her foot grinding against him, the phantom scent of her, the sight of her hand vanishing beneath her skirt, overwhelmed him. His cock hadn't fully subsided, a persistent, throbbing reminder. His phone buzzed again mid-afternoon. Another message from Odette. Video this time.

He locked his office door. The video was short. Five seconds. Her hand, fingers glistening wetly, trailing long, viscous strings of arousal from her intimate cleft. Thick, pearly strands stretched and snapped, clinging to her fingers before she slowly licked them away, her green eyes locked on the camera with predatory satisfaction. The message below: Thinking about dinner.

He groaned. Dinner. The word now carried the weight of yesterday’s confession and today’s escalating torment. He pressed play again. And again. Watching the slick evidence of her desire, evidence she flaunted.

The air in Odette’s penthouse foyer was cool, scented faintly with jasmine from an arrangement on a side table. Paul stood rigid, freshly showered but feeling utterly unclean, nerves humming. The door opened. Odette stood before him, barefoot, wrapped in a short, white silk robe. Her skin glowed with a post-workout sheen. Her dark hair was damp at the temples, clinging to her forehead.

"Come," she commanded, turning without waiting. He followed her into the living room, the familiar French posters seeming to leer. She stopped near the large, low sofa. Without preamble, she untied the robe and let it slide to the floor.

She stood naked. But this wasn't the pristine, photographed intimacy of the morning. This was raw aftermath. Her athletic body was flushed, muscles defined. Sweat still gleamed in the hollow of her throat, between her breasts, tracing the lines of her abs. But it was the junction of her thighs that commanded his horrified, fascinated gaze.

Her pubic hair, dark and damp, was plastered to her skin. Sweat had pooled and run, mingling with her own slickness, creating a glistening, sticky mess. The scent hit him immediately – a potent, pungent cocktail. The sharp, acrid tang of dried sweat, layered thickly over the deep, unmistakably musky scent of aroused female flesh, but intensified, fermented almost by the heat and confinement of her gym clothes. It was dense, humid, animal. A sour, salty, deeply intimate odor that filled his nostrils, thick and cloying.

She hooked one foot onto the edge of the sofa, spreading her legs wide, presenting herself. The sight was visceral. Her labia, still swollen, glistened not with fresh arousal, but with a thick, opaque film. Sweat and her own natural lubrication had mixed into a creamy, slightly yellowish sludge that coated her folds, pooled around her entrance, and streaked down the inside of her thighs. It looked used, heavy, profoundly unclean.

"Look at it," she ordered, her voice husky but devoid of its usual playful lilt. This was pure command. "That's the glistening morning dew I sent you in a photograph, that’s my interrupted orgasm in your office, it’s the video I sent you this afternoon. And now it’s two hours of spin class. That's me, Paul. All of it. Sweat. A full day of my own juice. Stale perfume. Everything." She took a step closer. The scent intensified, a physical presence. "You told me you preferred dinner. Tonight, this is dinner."

She pointed to the floor directly in front of her spread legs. "On your knees. Now."

He dropped. The plush carpet met his knees. The smell enveloped him, a humid, salty, overwhelmingly female musk that was both repellent and electrifyingly erotic in its rawness. His cock strained against his chinos, painfully hard again.

"Look closer," she demanded, spreading her lips slightly with her fingers. The inner folds were slick, a deeper pink, but coated in a sweaty slimy residue. He saw the tiny beads of moisture clinging to her dark curls, the streaks of thicker fluid. "You’re going to clean it. All of it. Lick me clean. Get your face right in there. Breathe it in. Taste all of me."

He hesitated, the sheer visceral reality of it, the pungent odor filling his mouth even before he touched her, warring with the submissive need that thrummed through him. The humiliation was exquisite, agonizing.

"Do I need to hold your head down?" Her voice was a low growl, dangerous. "You said any circumstances.”

The challenge, the threat, snapped the last thread. "No," he whispered, leaning forward. "No, I... I want it." He closed the distance.

He pressed his face into the hot, humid junction of her thighs. The smell was overpowering now – sweat, salt, the deep, putrid tang of day old arousal. His nose was buried in damp curls. His tongue extended tentatively, touching the slick, sweat-sheened skin of her outer labia. The taste exploded on his tongue – intensely salty, sour, a complex mix of her unique musk amplified tenfold by exertion. It was bracing, harsh.

He licked upwards, gathering the thick, creamy residue coating her. It clung to his tongue, heavy and viscous. He swallowed, the taste settling on his palate – salty, musky, undeniably her, but concentrated, fermented. He groaned, a sound muffled against her flesh, part revulsion, part ecstatic surrender.

"Yuk," she sneered, her hand coming down to grip the back of his head. Not gently. "That’s gross… now swallow it."

He obeyed, driven by the command and the dark thrill of his own degradation. He pushed his tongue deeper, probing between her slick folds. The inner flesh was hotter, slicker, the taste less diluted by sweat, more purely her arousal, but still underpinned by that potent fermented tang. He lapped at her entrance, tasting the thicker fluid there, licking upwards to gather the streaks on her inner thighs. The salty-sour musk coated his lips, his chin. He sucked at her clit, finding it engorged beneath its sweaty coating, and she hissed, grinding her hips forward against his mouth.

"Oui," she moaned, her fingers tightening in his hair, pulling him tighter. "Eat it. Lick your dinner up.”

The crude words, the relentless pressure of her hand, the overwhelming sensory assault – sweat, salt, musk, the sheer physicality of her need – pushed him deeper into submission. He devoured her, tongue working furiously, sliding through the sticky mess, lapping at every fold, every crevice, swallowing the potent mixture of her fluids. He chased the taste, the sensation, the profound intimacy of consuming her exertion, her raw, unfiltered essence. Her hips bucked against his face, her moans escalating, raw and guttural. He felt her inner muscles begin to flutter around his probing tongue.

"Fuck! Yes! DON'T STOP!" she screamed, her body arching, her grip on his head becoming almost painful. He redoubled his efforts, tongue fucking her as she ground down, her climax crashing over her in waves. Her thighs clamped hard around his ears, muffling the world to the sound of her gasps and the wet, obscene sounds of his tongue working her soaked, sweaty cunt.

She shuddered violently against his face, a long, drawn-out moan tearing from her throat. He kept licking, gentler now, cleaning her through the aftershocks, gathering the last traces of sweat and spend. Finally, she sagged, releasing her death grip on his head. He pulled back slightly, breathing raggedly, his face glistening, wet with her, her strong aroma in his nose, the taste and texture of her congealed day’s discharge thick in his throat.

She looked down at him, her chest heaving, her expression a mixture of satiated exhaustion and cool appraisal. She ran a hand over her now-glistening mound, bringing her slick fingers to her mouth, tasting them thoughtfully as she looked at his debauched face.

"Clean enough," she stated flatly. She picked up her robe, wrapping it loosely around herself. "You can go now." She turned towards her bedroom. "Good dog."

Paul remained on his knees on the plush carpet, the thick, salty musk of her lingering on his lips, in his nose, saturating his senses. The dismissal was absolute. The taste of sweat and desperate cunt was his only reward. He trembled, utterly spent, profoundly owned, staring at the closed bedroom door as the heavy silence of the penthouse settled around him.

The echo of ‘Good dog’ hung in the air, a collar tighter than any silk tie. Paul remained frozen on his knees, the plush carpet fibres pressing into his sweat-dampened skin. Odette’s taste – that potent, salty, sour blend of her day’s sweat and slick arousal – coated his tongue, thick and cloying, a flavour both repellent and intoxicating. He swallowed, the aftertaste lingering, a visceral reminder of his submission. His cock, deflated but still heavy, twitched uselessly against his thigh. The sharp click of her bedroom door closing echoed in the sudden silence of the penthouse, vast and expensive around his kneeling form.

Go? The thought was ash in his mouth. She’d used him, wrung an orgasm from his mouth using the rawest evidence of her own body, and dismissed him like a servant. The shame burned, hot and familiar, but beneath it surged something hotter, darker, more desperate. Not just the humiliation. Need. A raw, primal ache deep in his gut that the frantic lapping hadn’t touched. He didn’t want her taste. He wanted her. He wanted to fuck her. To bury himself deep in that hot, tight cunt he’d just cleaned so thoroughly, to feel her clench around him, not just his tongue. To reclaim… something. Not control, never that with Odette, but a different kind of possession. They’d done it before. A handful of times, lost in the blurry edges of late nights or early mornings, moments where her dominance had momentarily shifted, allowing him entry. It had never been equal, always charged with the underlying dynamic, but he’d been inside her. Felt her walls grip his cock, heard her gasp his name without the cruel edge.

‘Good dog.’ The words rang in his skull, sharp and mocking. A command. A dismissal. An identity. The spark of rebellion flared, fanned by the lingering musk in his nostrils and the deep throb of unfulfilled need. Fuck leaving. Fuck obedience. He stood on shaky legs, the movement unsteady. His fingers, trembling, went to the buttons of his shirt. The fine cotton, once crisp, was rumpled, damp from her sweat or his own tension. He peeled it off, letting it fall carelessly onto the carpet beside Odette’s discarded robe. His belt buckle clinked, the zipper rasped loudly in the stillness as he shoved trousers and boxers down. He kicked them aside, standing naked in the dim light filtering through the tall windows. The cool air raised goosebumps on his skin, but the heat inside him was furnace-hot.

He didn’t look towards her bedroom door. Instead, he lowered himself back to the carpet. Not kneeling. He folded his legs beneath him, then stretched out on his side, curling his body into a tight curve. He rested his head on his bent arm, a deliberate mimicry of a resting hound. The plush fibres scratched against his bare hip, his shoulder. He closed his eyes, breathing slowly, deliberately, forcing his body to still despite the frantic pulse hammering in his throat, the insistent ache in his balls. He listened. The distant hum of the city. The subtle ticking of a clock somewhere. The near-silent rush of air through the penthouse vents. His own heartbeat, loud in his ears. He waited. Breathing. Feeling the scrape of carpet on skin, the chill on his exposed back. Waiting for her. The silence stretched, thick and tense, punctuated only by the relentless internal echo: Fuck her. Be inside her. Make her feel it.

Time lost meaning. Minutes bled into an undefined stretch of near-silence and escalating tension within him. The cool air dried the lingering dampness on his face and chest. The sharp edges of Odette’s musk in his nostrils softened, becoming a pervasive, intimate background scent woven into the penthouse itself. He remained utterly still, coiled tight, every nerve ending screamingly aware of his nakedness, his vulnerability, his raw, undiminished need. His cock lay heavy and half-hard against his thigh, a persistent physical echo of his desire.

Then, the soft snick of a door handle. Not loud, but shattering in the silence. Paul didn’t move, didn’t open his eyes. He held his breath, every muscle locked. Soft, barefoot steps padded across the polished floor beyond the carpet, heading towards the open-plan kitchen area. The faint clink of a glass. The rush of water from a tap. He pictured her: the short robe retied, perhaps, hair sleep-tousled, moving with the unconscious grace that always undid him. He heard her take a sip, the small sound magnified. Then the footsteps turned. Coming back. Closer. Passing the edge of the kitchen, moving across the marble towards the living area carpet where he lay. They stopped. He felt the weight of her gaze before he saw it. A palpable pressure on his exposed skin.

He opened his eyes. She stood a few feet away, silhouetted against the dim city light from the windows. The white robe hung loosely, tied at the waist, revealing the long line of her legs, the shadowed dip of her cleavage. Her green eyes were dark, unreadable pools in the low light, fixed on him. On his naked form curled on her floor. She took another slow sip from the glass of water, her gaze never leaving him. It wasn’t surprise. It was assessment. Cool, detached appraisal. She lowered the glass. Her expression remained impassive, but a flicker – amusement? curiosity? something infinitely more dangerous – touched her eyes as she took in his deliberate posture, his blatant act of canine submission combined with his refusal to leave.

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